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So they live on Avalon?
so. very. cool.
Is there anymore?
Not sure as to how much I can really critique on seeing as that alot was already mentioned. ^_^; It really flowed though, and I loved all of the differant views that the panels had. The close up and the perspective panels, and the ones that zoomed out abit and gave a sense of an actual backround/scenery and not just white space. Some of the character's diverse styles really showed their differant personalities too.
I have to say, as a person who hopes to start working on their own comics one day, I think I've learned a lot more from your comic that I guess you would have from my comment xD; But yeah, Awesome job!
Is this just a rough version of it? I sure hope so, because to see it more fleshed out would be AMAZING.
I really liked this because I really enjoyed the characters (and the story, although it was short), and your art is just so cute, I love it! The only thing I would have to say about the actual comic itself that I thought wasn't the best was the paneling--it was a little weird. Other than that, though, fantastic!